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Hospital informationization construction's thorough, the electronic medical record's implementation will become finally inevitably, the perfect electronic medical record manufacture and the management standard and will make the related law, will be advantageous to the safeguard electron medical record healthy development, to will raise the overall medical level, the impetus clinical research and so on to have the great significance. How therefore to enable the electronic medical record the use to protect the medical trouble both sides legitimate rights and interests, has become in our country electron medical record legislation the major issue. Along with the electronic medical record use scope's expansion, the question which will bring will be more. The electronic medical record needs the networking operation, along with the browsing object scope's expansion, whether patient's privacy to obtain the protection to become one of questions. 2005 promulgations "Electronic Signature Law" also the possible condition which provides for the electronic medical record's legislation. This article through the above question's discussion, puts forward some feasible proposals for our country electron medical record's legislation.

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Informationize construction of hospital going deep into, electron medical record putting into effect may become necessity eventually , perfect electron medical record fabrication and the administrative standard and work out the relevance law, health all beneficial to ensuring electron medical record develops , is of great importance to improving overall medical treatment horizontal , driving studying clinically and so on. The lawful rights and interests therefore how to use electron medical record sigmatism energy protection medicine trouble both sides, already becomes major issue in our country electron medical record legislation. Expand with the fact that electron medical record uses range's, problem bringing about general more. Electron medical record needs networked operation , expand with browsing marriage partner range's, whether patient's private matters one wants to hide can get protection will become one of problem. 2005 legislation promulgating also for electron medical record possible condition providing. The main body of a book investigation and discussion by above-mentioned problem, for our country electron medical record legislation put forward a little feasible suggestion.